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could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby vitalbass » Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:35 pm

hello everyone

i used to make Hardcore but quit at the end of 2008 and have started to make Commerical Dance music i am to old for hardcore and have moved away from the scene but i was wondering if you guys could give me an honest view and feed back i know That your all hardcore lovers but i feel your advise and words would really give me an honest opinion.

If you think the song is crap fair play am totally cool with that and expect that not everyone will like it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O7g_GvDmOns

Ok if you clcik that link it will load up my video on youtube and play you my song please fire your comments away but give me advise on were i have gone wrong and wht could be improved


cheers guys
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby ravernath » Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:10 pm

I like it.

Very well made, and i like the piano's in it.


Maybe a few double beats on the 16th/32nd beats, no one does this anymore!

Not sure on the no no no sounding winding up noise effect before the drops, but liking the slower bit.


Can i download this anywhere?
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby Skampy » Tue Feb 09, 2010 1:01 pm

Not a big listener of this type of dance music, but very nice track mate. 8)
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby danedge+mcedge » Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:14 pm

just listening now ;)


mate love the vocal and the piano at the beginning.


the synth sounds good too, sounds like it needs to come through a little tiny bit more, if you know what i mean.. may be my speakers tho ;)


good work!

really liking it cant give too much feedback coz i dont know the genre but sounding good bro
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby Thumpsta » Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:45 pm

What kind of hardcore did you make mate? What was your artist name? :)
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Postby StrifeII » Fri Feb 12, 2010 8:45 pm

Sounds great. Well produced!
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby Eufeion » Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:02 pm

Thumpsta wrote:What kind of hardcore did you make mate? What was your artist name? :)


They were X-Virus mate.

Same people who had Angel of Darkness (Eufeion Remix) out my label a year or so ago, that also appeared on COH3 :)
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby Phenex » Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:32 am

Sounds really good, mate!
Personally, I'd turn up the piano 3 to 6dB and put a bit of reverb on it and remove the piano from the chorus.
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby vitalbass » Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:52 pm

http://www.imodownload.com/search/vital%20bass

If anyone would like to download it i have it up on IMO downloads :D cheap as chips like


thank you for the nice comments guys :D
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Re: could i ask for your advise & feed back on my dance track

Postby StrifeII » Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:15 am

Eufeion wrote:
Thumpsta wrote:What kind of hardcore did you make mate? What was your artist name? :)


They were X-Virus mate.

Same people who had Angel of Darkness (Eufeion Remix) out my label a year or so ago, that also appeared on COH3 :)


That was nice and obvious!
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